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IELTS Writing Task 2


You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.


Write about the following topic:


Some people think that young people should be required to have full time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree?


Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.


Write at least 250 words.


Plan Your Answer


1. 仔细审题,明确作文讨论的话题和作文类型,此题属于观点选择型作文。

2. 第一段(introduction):改写题目提出内容,引出写作了。

3. 第二段(body 1):说明全日制学习的好处。

4. 第三段(body 2):分析了选择全日制学习的原因。

5. 第四段(conclusion)说明观点:接受教育是一个终生的过程,全日制教育应该是义务教育,直到人们年满18岁


Sample Answer



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Most of us have grown up being taught the importance of education. However, people have different opinions on how to conduct it. Generally, l believe that one should receive full time education until he or she is at least 18 years old.


Receiving full-time form of education involves attending classes at school, i.e. regular attendance of lectures and seminars on the schedule, and the study of teaching materials is more in depth in learning community like school. As members of this community, students are not information recipients who acquire the knowledge in a passive way; instead, they are challenged to achieve their potential and indeed to excel. Therefore, school education provides learning conditions that encourage students to remain curious, to value diversity in opinions and perspectives, to think critically, and to communicate effectively. In this way, students can gain problem-solving experience and confidence which contribute to the development of their capabilities and personalities.


It is true that education is not limited to knowledge from books only but can also be obtained through practical experiences outside of the classroom. Thus, young people should be encouraged to take the initiative to engage in activities such as unpaid community services or to apply for a part-time job to expand their social experience. Nevertheless, frustrating school years or distractions outside of school might drive people to believe that there could be better options than receiving full time education for under-aged people. Unfortunately, the truth is that full-time form of education not only secures academic qualifications which are essential for getting a promising career but al5o leads to self-achievement which is a demand to almost everyone.


To conclude, most countries have their school leaving age set at 18 years old for a good reason. I believe that pursuing education is a life-long process and that full time education should be compulsory until people are at least 18 years old.


Topic-related Vocabulary


conduct  v. 执行

lecture  n. 讲座

seminar  n. 研讨课

potential  n. 潜力

diversity  n. 差异

capability  n. 

frustrating  adj. 令人沮丧的


Coherence & Cohesion


Nevertheless  在文中意为“尽管如此”。

Generally  在文中意为“普遍地”。

Therefore  在文中意为“因此”。


Sentence Structures


1. As members of this community, students are not information recipients who acquire the knowledge in a passive way; instead, they are challenged to achieve their potential and indeed to excel.

学生作为这个群体的一员,并不是被动地获取知识的信息接受者;相反,他们面临的挑战是发挥自己的潜力,真正做到出类拔萃。


2. It is true that education is not limited to knowledge from books only but can also be obtained through practical experiences outside of the classroom.

的确,教育不仅仅局限于书本上的知识,也可以通过课堂外的实践经验来获得。





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