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雅思写作真题解析:电脑学习的利与弊
发布来源: 虾球雅思 发布时间:2019-08-30


随着笔记本、平板在日常生活中的普遍应用,许多家长认为可以通过电脑调动孩子们的积极性,从而达到让他们主动学习的目的。但是学生用电脑真的只是学习吗?他们又是否有足够的自控能力拒绝游戏的诱惑呢?


电脑究竟是否适合用来长时间学习,也引起了激烈的讨论。


我们来看一下2019.8.17的雅思大作文题:

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More and more parents are allowing their children to play on computers and tablets as they think that children should learn technology skills. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

 

题目解析


本题主要讨论,越来越多的父母允许孩子通过玩电脑游戏或平板电脑的方式学习科学技术,这一趋势是利大于弊还是弊大于利。属于利弊类的题目。


针对题干提出的问题,首先应该给出自己的观点,然后在后文论证给出这一观点的理由。


本文的主要观点是弊大于利,主体段落分两段,第一段首先阐述了优点,第二段给出更为重要的缺点,注意给出的缺点一定要比优点影响更大,更能说服人不去采用这一方法,以体现“outweigh”。

 

文章结构


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P1第一句引出话题,第二句明确给出自己的观点。


P2讨论两点advantages。


P3(更深入的)讨论disadvantages。


P4重复自己观点,说明理由。


范文示例


Nowadays, in order to encourage children to learn technology skills, an increasing number of parents tend to allow them to play computer games. Although this strategy does help to some extent, I do not think the advantages can offset drawbacks.

 

It is an undeniable fact that playing on digital devices brings children an early exposure to science and technology,since it is easy and natural for them to get the hang of computer skill sthrough various procedures in the games. Moreover, children's interests will be stimulated through game-playing. Compared with those who are taught knowledge passively, children allowed to play on electronic devices are more likely to be attracted by these high-tech products, and then figure out more operations on their own.


However, despite the benefits referred to above, there are even more disadvantages. First, parents must make it clear that technology skills are never confined in the scope of computer games, and most valuable skills cannot be learnt just through computer games and tablets.Second, people, especially children, can easily get addicted to computer games,which will then lead to their spending more and more time playing and thus abandoning their study. Additionally, children would justify their game-playing byciting that they are learning skills, and under the permission of their parents they tend to spend more time playing without recognition.

 

In a word, I do not think it is a good way for children to learn new technology just through playing computer games; although this strategy can easily trigger interest, it has little to do with the main technology skills and would spoil children who lack self-control.


词汇积累


  • tend to 倾向于,趋向

  • offset 抵消

  • get the hang of / grasp 掌握

  • get addicted to 沉溺于,对…上瘾

  • trigger 引起,引发


实用句型


原句:However, despite the benefits referred to above, there are even more disadvantages.


句型:Despite + n.   表示让步



电脑的确可以让学习更加便利,但并不能将其作为培养学习能力的主要途径;家长依旧要控制孩子们的使用时间,防止其沉迷其中,失去自控能力。当然,这对我们每一个人来说都是如此。


电脑被发明出来的目的是带来便利,我们应当恰如其分地利用它;同时更要警惕被它支配。


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